Wallace Stevens Essay, Commas, Connecticut, Rugged Independence and Good Will to All
This passage from a Wallace Stevens essay moved me, in part because I have been in the Connecticut visiting my mom, family and the land of my origin. It also strikes me that all of those writing instructors that I have had, who kept trying to remove almost every comma from my writing, were wrong. Notice how lovely the abundant use of commas make this piece, and how hard it would be to create as lovely an essay if it was attempted without them.
“I was not myself born in the state. There is nothing that gives the feel of Connecticut, like coming home to it. . .